So for my English class we turn in our reading response papers online. We use this dropbox system provided by epsilen, which allows everyone else in the Englsih group to view your paper if they so choose to.

Me being my nosy self chose to. And now I am SORELY disappointed.

Ignoring the fact that there are obvious capitalization issues along with the title of the article not being italicized, wtf is wrong with this sentence?

NOTE: If you can't identify the gross typo, please remove me from your friends list.

"In foul shots the story and the story of David talamantez deal with the rules your sup post to abide by. "

'Sup post'? SUP POST?! WTF IS THIS?!

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I just got back a peer review from my composition class, and the only rationalization that I can find as to why my review was so negative is because I slammed the reviewer's paper. Because it sucked, and that's all there was to it.

I don’t think I know what the main point was to the paper. I felt like I was searching for it.
Did you try looking at the last sentence in the intro paragraph where a thesis statement USUALLY is?

I don’t think that the paper is in the correct format that it is suppose to be in. Its suppose to be Times New Roman, font size 12.
Are you incapable of opening up the paper in Word and checking to see that it IS in the proper format?

You need to talk more about the American Dream. After reading the paper I didn’t understand your point of view of the American Dream.
That's because the topic WASN'T the American Dream, dumbass.

I don’t see anywhere where I can say that your paper has an argument. Besides the fact that you stated how life is different now from then, I don’t see anything that’s controversial to the pieces.
IT'S A COMPARISON PAPER, THERE ISN'T SUPPOSED TO BE AN ARGUMENT. THERE ARE COMPARISONS!!

Read your paper after you write it. If you don’t understand it than your audience won’t.
MORE LIKE IF YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND IT THEN MY VOCABULARY IS ABOVE YOU. AND I SHOULD PEER REVIEW YOUR PEER REVIEW. 'than your audience won't' => THEN*

Today after my English class Stacy caught me in the student union. We went and met up with Rob who was all, "Hey look!" with his laptop and managed to snag a picture of me which he then proceeded to post on my facebook wall.

After that I went with Stacy to her soc class, ran into Troy on the way, went to physics, then arrived late to band because of my class conflict. Went to the bookstore with Mandie, Brian met up with us, hung out a bit, went to MY soc class, went to Whitmer's chicken BBQ, ran into Aaron while looking for Stacy, was about to leave but decided to drive around to the front of the school, saw Stacy walking with June & Derek, parked horribly and slammed on my horn to get their attention, fixed my parking while they all waited, chatted for a bit, went inside and chatted with some of the students, left a note under the door to Novak's office & signed it along with Stacy & June, went to Derek's, became hypnotized by the effing awesome laser lights, played Scene It, lost twice, went home, about to crash.

Socializing is tiring.

Today the piccs were saying how they wanted two sets of t-shirts. One set professionally printed, and another set made by us, with like, the spraypaint and stencils. The shirts made by us would have nicknames on the back.

Alysha looked and me and said, "I wish we could fit 'Because I'm Asian' on Sarah's." (I APPROVE). Jessica suggested 'KNOCKOUT' since I passed out... GUHHHH.

So now apparently, mine will say "B/C I'M ASIAN".

HUZZAH.

We have three TVs in the house, not including the small portable one in Alex's room, and they are all being used.

I JUST WANNA PLAY FFXII. IS THAT SO MUCH TO ASK?